Thursday, November 1, 2012

Project #3 Intro/Conversation Draft

          Stripping discourse communities down to its' essentials, the whole concept is a relation of those inside the community--or to outsiders--that share the same communications, beliefs, and purpose toward a sense of a shared understanding of an overall goal. The range of this concept even extends within the members inside the communities, where the majority of members share similar practices, ideas, interests, personalities, and plans with one another. So as the members come together, the community will then focus on a subject each person have specific thought patterns. With these patterns, the communities can differ on the subject, whenever the dependency is focused on a quest for enlightenment of a writing topic, or gossip towards a infamous pop star a lot of the members the community agrees on. Therefore, the sophistication of words chosen to express the subject--the language, grammar syntax, and discipline--will differ from one community to another. Yet, no matter on how wide the age, class, or education an individual receives, one rule stands above all else within each of those communities, which revolves around understanding the principles and applying that for the benefit of the community at large. Basically, if someone wants to join a club and feel like they belong to that specific club, the individual has to pay attention on how the community speaks to one another, how they express their thoughts towards a subject matter within that community, and be aware of the relationship of each member and their beliefs with those principles.   

          But like the various communities that deal with different assumptions of separate duties, different writers have different interpretations on how to fulfill on what exactly a discourse community is, mostly commented by professors who specializes in English. John Swales, writer of "The Concept of Discourse Community," notices many different interpretations of a discourse community--one involves on how it relates with the evolution of speech communities--and as a response to each, he creates his own version into six characteristics: public goals, intercommunication, information, genres, specific lexis, and members of dicoursal expertise (Writing About Writing, 471-473). With these characteristics, members of each discourse can vary in number, resulting in individuals belonging in different communities on their level of interest (476).

          James Paul Gee, writer of "Literacy, Discourse, and Linguistics", however, believes that individuals cannot be recognized as a member of a Discourse, or "saying (writing)-doing-being-valuing-believing combinations," unless a center conflict of those members and the individual form for the purposes of that community (484). As such, different levels of Discourse communities--dominant Discourses and nondominant Discourses--brings different members at different levels of mastery, further demanding the conflicts into battles of greater importance to the community if the individual has his way, resulting in members never outright being a pure member of a Discourse fully. 

          Amy Devitt, Anis Bawarshi, and Mary Reiff, the writers for "Materiality and Genre in the Study of Discourse Communities," meanwhile, looks at analyses based on genre that results in a conflict of a nonmember and the community over a specific topic. This conflict can which range from voting on a ballot, judging words with court members, a Patient Medical History Form, or researching ethnography--studying a community by using material within, such as text, composition, and language--to figure out what genre can do to further extend on a technique that can contribute to the matters in some way.

          Getting away from techniques, Elizabeth Wardle, the writer of "Identify, Authority, and Learning to Write in New Workplaces," looks into different discourses with the construct of an individual's thought pattern.  Using a theory from theorist David Russell, she writes that the individual has to go through modes of belonging--engagement, imagination, and alignment-- to participate within many communities, resulting a conflict of the individual who wanted something out of the community than what the group that forms the community did want (523-524). Using a specialist to further expand on that conflict, Wardle uses the subject to further expand on her thoughts of an individual being an authority figure, the rebellion against those who do have that figure, and the identities formed by that person, and those within the community, to figure out why learning inside discourse communities involves more than relying the thought patterns of an individual, leading towards more involvement towards the community's process to be enculturated as a fully realized member, or risk not being one at all.

          With these discourse community theories, I plan to look into my own family and figure out if being an offspring of members inside that particular community has any effect to the conversation the writers have in regards to discourse community. Does the offspring have responsibilities nonmembers do not have to worry about at all? Has the thought pattern of an individual within that community have any overall say in the state of the discourse once it grows up, or is is forever determined by an authority before a certain age and becomes obsolete when a member grows up? Is being an offspring of members allow looser restricts to the principles that form the community, or is it even more strict, knowing that the responsibility looms that member into submission of authority? Using the theories, along with doing some research, such as looking into emails or text written by each member, I will find out if that is indeed the case, classifying it as a unique discourse community, or find out that I do not have the enculturation needed to be a member of that community.

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Reading Response #17

          "Identify, Authority, and Learning to Write in New Workplaces" is an article written by Elizabeth Wardle--as a web page formed with academic authority in mind--that brings attention to a "complex view of communication" that pits newcomers of any subjects against conformation of experienced members of a discourse community (Writing About Writing, 521). If the story of "Alan" described in the second half of the article explained anything, it proves to the reader that no matter where the location of this battle comes in, issues of "identify and authority" always come into play, where conflict arrives when the thoughts on the individuals, from others, contradicts with the beliefs of the individual himself (Writing About Writing, 522-523). For example, when Alan refused to work "successfully behind the scenes," such as sending poorly written emails to graduate students than following the convention of traditional proofreading, ignoring to speak to the problems and clung to his own opinion on the writing, a conflict was created behind his back. Responding to this problem--using a theory from Etienne Wenger--Wardle suggests, for both the individual and the community, to apply "three interrelated modes of belonging": engagement, imagination, and alignment" (Writing About Writing, 524).  If applied correctly with these practices, which ranges from personal feelings and new practices beyond the person's control, the newly formed identify must now negotiate with the authority above him, and community below him, to get what he wants, no matter how harsh the demands may be, even if the person is aware on how much he has "confined most of his directives" to parts of the community (Writing About Writing, 532). As seen with Alan quitting his employment for "non-participation," the risk for not meeting those demands will result in a lose of that authority; trying harder to get along, or give up and move on (Writing About Writing, 531).

          All in all, bringing together this idea of entitlement between an individual and a discourse community this article brought leaves an interesting dynamic to the concept of what exactly those communities are. If Wardle was trying to teach its' readers "that learning to write in new communities entails more than learning discrete sets of skills or improving cognitive abilities" (Writing About Writing, 533), then it simply adds to John Swales's article ("The Concept of Discourse Community") of staying away from  the "communities [that] are only to be associated with intellectual paradigms or scholarly cliques" (Writing About Writing, 473). In other words, looking at Swales' six characteristics of discourse community, he would argue for the freedom of individuals away from one specific community, for various reasons, into other communities that better fit the genre they belong to. With these freedoms, they would led into what James Paul Gee ("Literacy, Discourse, and Linguistics") describes as not "be let into the game after missing the apprenticeship and be expected to have a fair shot at playing it," where the individual will have to go beyond of learning his own craft, his fluency, to gain the trust of the community around him--a point Wardle empathizes in her story with 'Alan'  (Writing About Writing, 487). Even the use of genre, where the use of the theory "may yield insight into teaching, research, and social interaction" (like when Devitt et al used their professions--lawyers and teachers--to further extend ethnomethodology as a research tool) has a place within Wardle's article (Reading About Writing, 98). Essentially, as a reflection of the community, each genre has a set of rules that "participants beyond a narrow community" have to solve on their own, whenever it involves voting on a ballot, filling out a PMHF, or using research as a student.

          Yes, this conflicts a bit with Wardle, where it's the individual against the establishment, instead of someone trying to understand a concept within their hands to solve. And if someone rereads Gee's purpose of "how the languages from different Discourse transfer into, interfere with, and otherwise influence each other" (Writing About Writing, 490),  they will discover what Gee really calls in favor of. Basically, the Discourses that "constitute each of us as persons are changing and often are not consistent with each other," which can then be applied to "values, beliefs, attitudes, interactional styles, uses of language, and ways of being in the world," instead of a center attitude of an individual controlling those discourse that is against that individualistic thinking (Writing About Writing, 485). Even then, both points are against the purpose of what Swales wanted to do with discourse communities. As he mentions, he just wanted "to clarify, for procedural purposes, what is to be understood by discourse community," setting up characteristics that appeals more to discourse communities that revolves under the participation of the individual within a community--deciding to add or leave at his own will-- that is not set up by socialized communicates of high expectations. But as Wardle puts it, it will be up to authority the individual THINKS he has that will define his place within the community, not the "norm-developed" criterion the individual has to work with to be with (Writing About Writing, 477). In other words, the person's own character, to Wardle, determines what will happen to the person within the community, while Swales believes that the group as a whole controls the individuals who work there.

Either way I put it, Haters Gonna Hate.

Sunday, October 28, 2012

You May Dream



This is the first frame in the first episode of an anime, directed by Hideaki Anno of Neon Genesis Evangelion fame, called Kareshi Kanojyo no Jijyo--or Kare Kano to speed up time to discuss the show with fans--and right away the central question of the show is out there in the open, with no context or meaning at sight. That is, at least until someone shouts out "Miyazawa," which then cuts to the next scene:


Which is then followed with text and a more scenic frame (all in the same cut too):




Now a context is formed, where the introduction of this character is given a graceful introduction. But then as the episode progresses, drawings that paint the character against that context, like this:
Or this:


Even this:


contradicts with that first impression. And through each image, there's a moral, which is spelled out before the second half of the episode begins:



Something's going on beyond of using exaggeration for the sake of exaggeration.

I've been thinking about this aspect of the show for a while now, and it only got me thinking even more deeply when I found a website that has the director, Anno himself, walk around various high schools in Japan and get a better grasp on what high school students think about nowadays, compared to his own feelings as a student himself many years ago. Coming off of a starting point on how to make anime through talking of other people, Anno had this to say (with the part that interests me the most in bold):
   
          I can’t stand people who run away, who refuse to face reality. Surely you’ll find
          something for yourself if you face reality head on. If nothing else, take a good look at
          your immediate surroundings. Don’t turn away from unpleasantness. Have a look at it
          too. With this in mind, ultimately I want to show a little reality in my works. If
          nothing else, I don’t feel any realism in something that has no reality mixed in with it.
          Thus, while my next production will be a girl’s manga about a high-school girl, it’s also
          partly real.


So if he wants to express reality, why go as far to use such abstraction to reach that specific goal? I have my theories on why that is, and if times permits in the future, I'm going to write down some of those theories to figure out something: Is there something deeper going on within this anime that the people who made this anime wanted to get across? Where is Anno going with all these tools out on their own?

Saturday, October 27, 2012

Project #3 Proposal

Introduction

          As the studies for discourse communities continue, the time has now come to observe a community the writer is interested in. As a starting point, Swales' six characteristics will be used to write down how the language that community can be constrained for the purposes of figuring out the various functions that are used within the community.  Using ethnographic studies, the principles will be used to help further prove how students should use their research to bring a community into a compelling context, bringing that community one is involved in into an understanding of each individual in a way other folks outside of a specific discourse community might not think of. Therefore, the community chosen for this project will be the writer's own family. Why his own family is chosen will be explained by demonstrating how the family can be classified as a discourse community, the writer's own thoughts on the community, how it functions as a member himself, the members chosen for a personal interview, and transcriptions used for research towards the study of the community.

Qualification  

          As identification of a group of individuals, John Swales proposed six characteristics of a discourse community to clarify how he understands discourse community as a literacy concept. For the purposes of this proposal, the writer will use each pointer and explain on how each principle applies to his own community:

          1. A discourse community has a broadly agreed set of common public goals.

Even if they are not explained explicaily at one time, the writer's family do have goals they need to achieve if they want to live together. As a family, the goals of the family, as a whole, will reflect on how each member will be persevered as a group, so as an example, when one member mentions to the other that he must go out and grab objects at a market, that person is adding to the survival not to himself, or herself, or to the one who sent him or her out to grab it, but to those inside the community that needs it, based on urgency. Even if the goals of the indivdiual might not reflect the hopes of another, each member is allowed to help out, out of a sense of loyalty, love, or any concept similar to the previous two. 

          2. A discourse community has mechanisms of intercommunication among its members. 

No matter how important an event might be, meetings of some individual will form if one person thinks it will benefit the community as a whole. This can range from an one on one meeting to discuss on an recently conspired event, to a festive holiday such as Easter, Thanksgiving, and Christmas.

          3. A discourse community uses its participatory mechanisms primarily to provide 
              information and feedback. 

If one member acts in a state of embarrassment, or if one member can not set out one particular goal--because of circumstances beyond their control--then another member must come in and help out on whatever the situation needs, whatever it involves cutting the grass or alerting the community on how much loud noise one person is making.

          4. A discourse community utilizes and hence possesses one or more genres in the 
              communicative furtherance of its aims.

Each person within the community have a set of beliefs that belong only to that individual, so as a family, each member must figure out a balance that can not only create a satisfactory response of the individual, but also reflects good on the family as a whole. So if the budget and time will create safety for someone to go out to the mall and hang out with friends, there now lies the choice of whenever or not another individual wants to come along, for completely different purposes (such of wanting to buy something for his own amusement).  

          5. In addition to owning genres, a discourse community has acquired some specific 
              lexis. 

For this principle, one general rule applies: the quicker one sentence can be used to express what it is one member wants to communicate to another, the better that communication will be for both members. This communication can also apply to nicknames, as well if it can further express the affection one member has to the other.

          6. A discourse community has a threshold level of members with a suitable degree of 
              relevant content and discoursal expertise.

When one member of the community leaves, that does not mean that he or she can no longer benefit the community in colder terms. If the possibility of younger offspring arrives, each member can then be promoted into a greater role for that young member, creating more responsibility for each member to work around with.  

Interest 

          Living under the same place with the other members for decades, the writer's main interest really lies on whenever or not his own personal opinion of the family will conflict with the observation other make take with other communities if they were not a descendent of each member of that community. As as offspring of two of its' members, he wants to know whatever or not his personal involvement as a member will make him reflect on that community in a way it might not be is he was simply an observer far away, or non-related, from the family itself. Does he now have authority over the other members, or he is forever labeled as a 'child' of those same members? Has the feelings of his siblings changed over time, or is the battle each of them had at a young age still there? Has the community grown, now that each member is no longer legally classified as a child? Can the writer himself find out a way to express his thoughts of the family without upsetting anybody involved? It is these questions he wants to solve, determined to see if it was all worth it or not.

Interview 

          Regarding interviews, the writer wants to use one or more specific members in mind: the writer's sister, his own parents--consisting of a mother and father--and his grandparents.

Texts 

          For text, the writer is open to the possibility of using the following tools: emails, posts from various websites, PowerPoint presentations, the answers of homework problems, the text of books one member likes, notes written all over the location of the community, and cellphone texts (or Facebook comments) if needed.
         
Conclusion


       As an English freshman, the writer believes that since he has a major impact as a member of one specific community, he will bring a complexity to the text that will bring interest for readers to go through. Once finished, he hopes, the project will help further expand his education on how he should approach discourse communities; help clarify his own thoughts on that involvement as a member. Then he can figure out if his opinion will help him out when he goes out on his own, as an individual of society.

Sources

Wardle, Elizabeth, and Doug Downs. Writing about Writing: A College Reader. Boston: Bedford/St. Martins, 2011. 468-80. Print.

Reading Response #16

          "Materiality and Genre in the Study of Discourse Communities" is a series of articles written by Amy J. Devitt, Anis Bawarshi, and Mary Jo Reiff--all either a professor or assistant professor of English at a university (so there's a strong possibility these articles were written for specific academies)--that attempts to mold discourse communities into more tangible concepts, simplifying its' purpose into a craft; a set of tools for those who cannot fully grasp the potential within the complex context those communities have. The answer the articles thinks about then relates to genres, specially, how to be "responsive to such questions and link patterns of language use to patterns of social behavior," or simply "provide discipline and focus to the study of discourse communities" (Reading About Writing, 98).

          To respond to the suggestion that "genre analysis contributes to the use of ethnomethodology as a research technique that focuses on language and society," the main article use the main point of all three separate articles to further prove on how useful each would alert on genre inside each discourse community works (Reading About Writing, 98). To summarize, Devitt comments that "much of our civic lives involves genres that come out of a community of specialists, whether lawyers, legislators, or government employees," (Reading About Writing, 100) leaving the social matters of voting at a ballot, or serving as a jury member in court, to be at odds with the "users who would ideally reproduce the ideologies and agendas of the legal community" (Reading About Writing, 103). As such, the genres "created within one professional community to be used by nonmembers of that community" (Reading About Writing, 99)--the jury process and the ballots--must now be self-conscious to the problem that "the communal agendas of those who create genres may conflict with the interests of those who use them," leaving those who want to provide good effects to people lives to study their cases at hand and work towards a better understanding of each side (Reading About Writing, 103).

          Meanwhile, Bawarshi, instead of paying attention to socially relevant events, looks at a Patient Medical History Form (PMHF)--"a commonly used medical genre"--to "demonstrate how genre analysis gives access to the workings of discourse communities in a way"  to "characterize what we are referring to in this essay as discourse communities" (Reading About Writing, 104). To bring this idea into the forefront, she mentions that since the document "helps organize and generate the social and rhetorical environments within which patients and doctors speak to one another," the PMHF becomes "a genre [...] within the medical profession" that forms life as a "part of other social practices (relations between doctors and patients, nurses and doctors, doctors and other doctors, doctors and pharmacists, and so on)" (Reading About Writing, 105). Therefore, using genre analysis, students can now "reduce their abstract, symbolic, status" and make those communities "more visible and accessible to ethnographic inquiry" (Reading About Writing, 106).

          Reiff, relating back to the inquiry, sees that "ethnography has become an increasing presence in composition as a research method and a pedagogy," between "the general as well as the particular" (Reading About Writing, 107). So, if one uses her idea that "ethnography is both a genre "a research narrative) and a mode of genre analysis--a research methodology used to grasp cultural beliefs, and ideologies," (Reading About Writing, 107) along with using the label of 'mini-ethnographies', which revolves around studying more specific literacy events, to carry about certain teaching instructions, then ethnographics can be teached inside the classroom while the students are using it within that discourse community with the tools, such as observation or interviews, with them. In other words, if done correctly, students "assume the role of investigators who are learning to speak from their authority as researchers" to further grasp what it is for them to "compose communities while composing in communities" (Reading About Writing, 109)

          All these articles sets out exactly what John Swales wanted discourse communities to be in "The Concept of Discourse Community." After laying out his own version of how discourse communities should be conceptualized, he reminds the reader that "those interested in discourse communities have typically sited their discussions within academic contexts, thus possibly creating a false impression that such communities are only to be associated with intellectual paradigms or scholarly cliques" (Writing About Writing, 473). But the approach the cluster of writers all share with one another, compared to Swales, is that simplification of how discourse communities can expand beyond certain contexts into individuals going into their own communicates only stabilizes "an imaginary consensus and a shared purpose that do not reflect real experience within communities" (Reading About Writing, 98). Therefore, the solution does not lie on the individual, but on an ethnomethodology technique that "contribute to the pedagogy of text-dependent subject matter" not for the student's benefit, but for teachers, researchers, AND the student (Reading About Writing, 98).

          All in all, I find it interesting that for this article, instead of one writer articulating his point to come across the article, the person editing this article decides to look at the purposes of three individuals writers, find relations to one another, and puts them all into a context that serves to apply what the article is all about: genre within discourse communities. With those various perspirations, I can see what exactly the editor wants to accomplish in that article, and appreciate reading different opinions to further expand my own personal opinion on the concept. Hopefully those purposes will help me out on how I should frame discourse communities to everyday objects beyond certain individuals, and I have a feeling that since I hold no objections to the text within, I think it will work out just fine.

Monday, October 22, 2012

Reading Response #15

          "Literacy, Discourse, and Linguistics" is an article written by James Paul Gee--possibly for other linguistics students--that calls in favor for "(writing)-doing-being-valuing-believing combinations," or "Discourses" with a capital D, that shall use language not for "what you say, but how you say it." (Writing About Writing, 483-484) If that primary Discourse is used correctly-- passing through tensions of two secondary Discourses by social practice--, then the primary Discourse will form a distinction of dominant ("secondary Discourses ... brings with it the (potential) acquisition of social 'goods'") and nondominant Discourses ("secondary Discourses ... which often brings solidarity with a particular social network, but not wider status and social goods in the society at large") (Writing About Writing, 485). As its' own two conflicts of someone's Discourses grow, the interference of each opposite Discourse will eventually result in studies that can actually be mastered, making it possible to be affirmative in any language, but doesn't guarantee flowing fluency necessarily. As such, students looking to use such language might "'resist' such 'superficial features of language,' so the connections needed for the Discourses to instruct no longer depends on the benefits of the concepts within those same Discourses, but towards social change students use for attraction not for learning, but to show off to peers (Writing About Writing, 488). In other words, a student has to use language "we must say or write ... while playing the right social role and (appearing) to hold the right values, beliefs, and attitudes," or risk social rejection for ideological reasons (Writing About Writing, 484).

          This idea of Discourse communities eventually forming into a social conflict somewhat ties back to John Swales' "The Concept of Discourse Community," where in order to be in one such community, someone has to aware that the concept creates "a false impression that such communities are only to be associated with intellectual paradigms or scholarly cliques" (Writing About Writing, 473), so expectations that someone might look for could be deceiving. As such, the individuals within the communities can move around into various other secondary Discourses if he or she wishes, to be free to ignore the demands needed to benefit each community and easily find communities that "overt instruction and are only fully mastered when everything else in the Discourse is mastered" (Writing About Writing, 488). Swales' sees this as a good thing, where his proposed criteria point in a direction where the non-assimilated ideas as "common public goals," "information exchange," and "a high general level of expertise" will result in a community that allows maximum flexibility for those members withing--"avoid developing multiple personalities, even if, with more senior and specialized students (Writing About Writing, 475-476). Gee, through his 'identify kit' theory on Discourse, thinks on the social aspects of those communities, and find out that because of "how much tension or conflict is present between any two of a person's Discourses" always being present, that flexibly suddenly becomes a threat (Writing About Writing, 484-485). As a respond, the Discourse learning as he sees it is not towards on how beneficial it might be towards the members, but on how much restriction it truly has, so those same members would not move not for how much he is interested in each community, but "their lack of mastery of such superficialities" would be used to interest certain groups of society.        

          To further explain the impact of a member in Discourses, let's take three activities, and me, I am involved in. For these activities, let's use my computer, the college I'm in, and my home. The three of these were chosen not because most of my time is spent on what goes with each time-frame I spent with each, but rather, the three places have different purposes that each correspond without each being aware of it, each having their own language for me to take care of. For instance, I could take my computer with me in either location and rarely have the events the other two games interfere on the purposes I have towards the computer--which is lurk around on forums and waste time on amusing videos. So, ignoring the language used within the communities of my computer (where it wouldn't surprise me if one concept, or for that matter, meme I read/watch inside the computer would later show up superficially--or actuality--in either location), I would say that what goes on around the house rarely shows up at events within my computer, and the concepts introduced to me within my college wouldn't really be discussed within the hallways of my home, simply for one reason. I simply chose to kept each other separate for the sake of making the lives of each occupation I'm in easily observable in some fashion, where each wouldn't interfere with the other, but that doesn't mean I'll keep them separate. If the moments arrives where a moment that happens in the house was too funny to keep to myself, then I can see myself quoting it inside, say, a Facebook conservation with someone and let them know on how silly it really is, because honestly, it's simply harmless.

          What isn't harmless is speaking with impeccable grammar and still be "wrong nonetheless." Reading Gee's text, I get the impression that what he meant was that the content within the text, either on how original, convenient, or though-provoking it is, is the core tool needed to really grab people's attention, not just the grammar itself, despite on easily crafted it might be to do so. As Gee himself puts it, "It is not just how you say it, but what you are and do when you say it" (Writing About Writing, 483). It's that ability to describe what the topic is about--and how someone can comprehend it--is what that sentence is trying to say, and speaking from experience of English papers getting praise for the content within, I would say that about matches what I've been taught about grammar--it's necessary, but not the main attraction of a paper.

          All in all, I would say that this article was a bit lighter compared to the last few responses, so as a result, I feel as if this response focused a little too much on what it was trying to say in much greater detail than the questions I were to answer, probably because figuring out what the article meant has my attention more than the questions. Despite that, I do like the brisk pace Gee works out, where to get his point across, he tells his audience what he wants to do through repetitive ideas. Looking at the article broadly, he tells what's going on, followed by an example that shows his point with amusing business, which is then shifts explain more on his point, eventually thinking about the concepts in details in an orderly fashion, then shifting back to the topic towards a bigger concept (society), then ending it all with another example. It's that directness I appreciate with the schedule I currently have, and if future articles retain that directness, then my gratitude certainly won't be rejected by my own account.

Saturday, October 20, 2012

Reading Response #14

          "The Concept of Discourse Community" is an academic article written by John Swales--to contribute to "an ongoing academic argument over the social (constructed) nature of language use" (Writing About Writing, 466)--that analyzes the various definitions of discourse communities to figure out hoe much of an impact those communities truly have towards writing. Swales, a "professor of linguistics," (Writing About Writing, 466) has trouble figuring out what exactly constitutes a 'discourse community,' mentioning that the many interpretation of the concept needs "a set of criteria sufficiently narrow that it will eliminate many of the marginal, blurred and controversial." (Writing About Writing, 469) Responding to his own dilemma (and ignoring the possible connection some readers might make with both discourse and speech communities), Swales lays out six principles summed up in the first sentence of each explanation:

          1. "A discourse community has a broadly agreed set of common public goals."
          2. "A discourse community has mechanisms of intercommunication among its 
               members."
          3. "A discourse community uses its participatory mechanisms primarily to provide 
              information and feedback."
          4. "A discourse community utilizes and hence possesses one of more genres in the   
              communicative furtherance of its aims."
          5. "In addition to owning genres, a discourse community has acquired some specific 
              lexis."
          6. "A discourse community has a threshold level of members with a suitable degree of 
              relevant content and a disbursal expertise." (Writing About Writing, 471-473)

In his own words, if someone uses these principles towards an interest any party, and that interest eventually peaks (like he did as a member of the Hong Kong Study Circle), then all 6 ideas will not only be assimilated into nothing, or threaten newcomers with multiple power each community has, but will overall imply two consequences:

          a. "individuals may belong to several discourse communities"
              (Writing About Writing, 476)
          b. "individuals will vary in the number of discourse communites they belong to and
                hence in the number of genres they command." (Writing About Writing, 476)

However, as he mentions, his thinking is "somewhat removed from memory," and as such, if someone wants to read his dialogue, then they should not look at it as a final conclusion of an intertextuality concept, but simply as "a matter for future study." (Writing About Writing, 478)

          This idea of forming 'discourse communities' into contexts beyond the various definitions made under academic usage goes back to Deborah Brandt's purpose of her text in "Sponsors of Literacy": as long as sponsors "deliver the ideological freight that must be borne for access to what they have," then sponsors can be anything, anyplace, or anybody at anytime, just as various 'discourse communities' could be separate itself into different groups without violating its' core. (Writing About Writing, 335) As such, it is attractive to see both articles support in favor of letting communities beyond an individual think about his writing for him, arriving at conclusions the author himself might not bother to arrive on in the first place. While appealing, Swales' article, however, presents a problem Brandt had no problems explaining. As she puts it, she wasn't planning to tie various definitions of sponsorship into a easily grasped list of principles, but thanks her research of 20th century life, she instead tries to "connect literacy as an development to literacy as an economic development." (Writing About Writing, 334) Swales, meanwhile, has to go away from "creating a false impression that such communities are only to be associated with intellectual paradigms or scholarly cliques," and as such, has to rely on his own experience and his own judgment of those scholarly articles to arrive at the principles he outlined. Of course, using such material is never a bad idea for arriving at specific conclusions, but for comparison sake, that is the big hurdle to take into consideration if one wants to make his or her own conclusion of comparing two articles of mechanical differences.

          Meanwhile, as for the description of a time I've felt "out of place," I would pretty much point to some of my school years. From my view, I wasn't into a lot of things other students were passionate about, and whenever I did get into something they did, I usually didn't share their enthusiasm--always on an outside perspective--, so to prove my existence towards them, I either tried whatever I could to grab some kind of attention--rather than letting it gradually develop among a group of friends--or just forget it and leave it alone. Because of this inability to connect to those group of friends, that could protect me at any moment, I had to develop my own pathway during activities, and as such, it wouldn't be a surprise that others saw me walk around the elementary school, just by myself, not really playing with the students or saw me get really passionate on minor social activities, such as quoting cartoons that hold my interest at that time and lurking around the book fair whenever it came around. As such, when my social image was crafted beyond my control, it wasn't one out of whatever it is I did during school time , or not to easily identifiable extremes: I didn't had the energy to become a handsome athlete, I wasn't passionate about my hobbies to become a well-known nerd, and I had no interest in becoming a well-respected singer, so sitting around at home, doing nothing in particular was a regular part of my day. Instead, it was towards how I acted towards others, and as such, I felt like I was at odds with that image, so I had to either battle against that image, or forgot about it and hope it wouldn't interfere on how I saw others. Why did I feel this way? If I had to make a guess, it would probably be a decision I made long ago: if I can't interest others to what I was, what is the point of trying to see where I came from? Whenever or not I made the right decision, and whenever or not I should blame myself or my surrounding for the circumstances that lead me toward that decision, reminds to been seen.

          So, to think a 'discourse community' I am in, to tie it to the last paragraph, I'm going to look at my own family and describe the six characteristics of a 'discourse community' by using them. How does it meet the characteristics? Summing it up, we look out for one another, no matter who or what we are. If I have to follow the rules the order...


          1. As a family, each of us must stick together and work to the best of our abilities to
             reach whatever it is we want to get done. If we can better ourselves as individuals by
             doing so, and if it possible to get the job done quicker by working together, then don't
             be surprised if each of us have to call each other to get by.
          2. If each of us need help, then scream out someone's name and make sure they
              understand what it is they want to get.
          3. If one of us messes up on something, or when any of us does something stupid, then
              they better know as soon as possible, or else risk embarrassment both for themselves
              and the family at large.
          4. No matter what it is we're into, we have to respect that it's part of who we are, and as
              such, we have to go with it, accept that it happened, and let them be who they want to
              be.
          5. The simpler our language is towards one another, the more likely we can return to
              whatever attracts us; try not to elongate your urgent pleas if it can be simplified.  
              Furthermore, if we get passionate about something, we are fully aware that we're
              doing it, so don't remind us we're doing it. Same principal applies if we use language
              that is socially unacceptable.
          6. If any of us gets in trouble, the chances that one of us has already gone through with
              it in the past has already happen. As such, we can offer support, no matter how out of
              hand it becomes, so if we have to only communicate through new technology, do so.
              If it's brand new, any of us are ready to work with it, together.
         
        
          All in all, I have once again worked on an article that has allowed me to look at a literary concept and figure out on how that idea can apply to how I look at my own life. After looking into the defining characteristics of Swales' perspective of a discourse community,  I realized I was using it all this time, just that I now can think about it conceivably than stumble through it clumsily with the language I previously knew. As such, I am now ready to apply it in the future if it's needed, but until then, I appreciate learning about it now, despite reading what is really part of a larger text analyzing a related subject. Either way, I am ready to return writing more of these, and if it involves learning clarification towards concepts I have really thought about in a certain way, once again, bring them on, I am ready.