Monday, September 3, 2012

Project 1 Proposal

          Construct: How semicolons, hyphens, and other punctuation marks are actually useful 
                                tools people don't know about. 

          Construct At Its' Most Visible: -When sentences do not form together to construct a 
                                                      single sentence, it becomes broken down into multiple 
                                                                        sentences that serves to support the single idea of the 
                                                      sentence to the broader paragraph.
                                                  
          Who Keeps It Alive: -Those who follow the rules of punctuation, but are fully aware they 
                                        are not rules, but guidelines that should still be taken seriously.
                                                      -Lawyers
                                                      -Lawmakers
                                                      -Writers
                                                      -Accounting Workers 
                                                      -Social Workers
                                                      -Teachers

          Influence Ways Of Thinking: -It makes the sentence specific; making two sentences that 
                                                                      share the same point without having to pad one long 
                                                     sentence.

           Write In Specific Ways:  -It arrives at a point as effectively as possible.
                                              -It reaches to the idea of the paragraph more quickly.
                                              -Empathize sentences that are needed to make the point of a 
                                                paragraph stronger.

          Conceptions About "Good" Writing:  -It punctuates meanings, not overall ideas.

          Search Terms: -"Rules"
                               -"Sentence structure"
                               -"Punctuation mark"
                               -"Independent Clauses"
                               -"Separation"
                               -"Emphasis"


          Brainstorming Questions: -What is good use of that sort of punctuation? 
                                              -Where did I learn this sort of materiel?
                                              -What happens if you use that sort of punctuation the wrong 
                                                              way?
                                              -How does that kind of punctuation expand the form of a piece 
                                                of writing?
                                              -Can you still go to a certain point without using that sort of 
                                                punctuation? 

         Research Ideas: -Find sentences that heavily use commas and study what happens when 
                                              you remove then and replace them with semicolons, hyphens, and 
                                              other punctuation.
                                 -Conduct research in library to see if various opinions on that kind of  
                                 punctuation is seen by various authors.
                                 -Discuss punctuation with teachers and what happens on when they 
                                  see that kind of punctuation in student's writings 

         Research Material (as of now): "Teaching Punctuation as a Rhetorical Tool", pg. 139,  
                                                      Writing About Writing 
                                                      3 other sources.                                    

         Goals:  -Why don't we see people use this kind of punctuation? Is it because of a lack a 
                     knowledge, or experience? 
                    -What exactly is the fundamental difference between a semicolon, a common, 
                           or a hyphen?
                    -Can you construct sentences without depending on commas, semicolons, etc.?
                    -How long does a sentence truly need to be to reach to a point? Does this kind 
                          of punctuation reach that point more efficiently? 


1 comment:

  1. Hi Chase,

    Something's going on with the formatting here. But I'm going to try my best to respond. What you seem to be deailing with here is the construct of punctuation rules and how these rules often stifle writers' ability and predisposition to actually use punctuation marks in meaningful ways. Rather, writers are so afraid of breaking the rules that they don't mess with punctuation much at all. The Dawkins piece is a good start as far as research. You might also want to look at some grammar guidebooks to get at some of the arbitrary punctuation rules that mislead or stifle writers. You could quote specific rules about specific punctuation marks, and then try to complicate or challenge those rules by showing how they could be broken to bring new and different meanings to sentences.

    I want you to keep an open mind with this project. See where your research takes you. I think your search terms are really good. You might also include "independent clause" or "dependent clause." Good work!

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